Kept the same storyline but tried to make it more avant-garde in how it was presented. This one feels pretty close. Things like zooms, pans, and screenshots will be cleaned up in the final edit.
I like the vlog style - great improvement. There are a few shots of you in which you look "cool" rather than "anonymous." You might want to stay with the zoomed in bits to give that sense of anonymity rather than "coolness"
I like the vlog style - great improvement. There are a few shots of you in which you look "cool" rather than "anonymous." You might want to stay with the zoomed in bits to give that sense of anonymity rather than "coolness"
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